Friday, October 14, 2011

satellite view redux

In a comment to yesterday's post, my friend Alan Mitchell offered this variation on my poem:

satellite view

a strange bird

I love it -- an example that even short, short poems can usually be improved by some judicious trimming. So here it is promoted from the comments to be a guest post for today. (Alan also contributed a guest haiku for this post on Sept. 11th.)

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