Here's another take on an image from
several days ago. This couplet edges into non-haiku territory in rhythm and excess, but what the hell...
picking the last flurry of tomatoes,
admiring the burgundy mum about to burst
If I want to think of it in haiku terms I'll hyphenate the whole thing and call it one long season word. An adjective describing the verge between late summer bounty and early fall bounty. Or better yet, call it an adverb since seasons are always on the move and never static...
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