Here's a haiku sequence that I wrote back in 2006. I called it a 'floating-leaf' sequence because the repetition of lines from verse to verse reminded me of a leaf floating back and forth on the way to the ground. When I first wrote it I formatted the lines in such a way that it looked much like a leaf falling down the page, too. But in the end I decided it impeded the sense of the poem, so I standardized it a little bit into this form...
in our bodies now
orange blossoms
over her childhood yard
grasshopper’s long arc
grasshopper’s long arc
over her childhood yard
shimmering
shimmering
on the motel window
trickles of sweat
trickles of sweat
on the motel window
a sickly flicker
a sickly flicker
the tv’s radiant breath
her naked arm
her naked arm
the tv’s radiant breath
goose pimples
goose pimples
her sunburst tattoo
rayed with wrinkles
rayed with wrinkles
her sunburst tattoo
still aglow
still aglow
the iris’ purple yearning
in our bodies now
in our bodies now
the iris’ purple yearning
the dead fire’s heat
(originally published in South by Southeast v.13:no.3, 2006)
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