tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3372023810212340305.post182347460984764493..comments2023-06-26T06:59:12.958-04:00Comments on No more moon poems: in the dry leavesJosh Hockensmithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08076902096863597045noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3372023810212340305.post-52288482776135629352011-08-26T22:49:58.253-04:002011-08-26T22:49:58.253-04:00Thanks, Josh... I know what you mean about nothing...Thanks, Josh... I know what you mean about nothing ever being finished. That's one of the reasons I did the (almost)365 project, so that I had to post things whether I was satisfied or not. Otherwise I could tweak until the day after I die. %\Curious Arthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01180271950246123614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3372023810212340305.post-84065791471863315042011-08-25T22:31:34.667-04:002011-08-25T22:31:34.667-04:00Hi Leah -- thanks for browsing, and for your input...Hi Leah -- thanks for browsing, and for your input. You're right about missing the squirrel -- that contrast is missing in the later versions. I'll keep toying with it (none of my haiku are every really finished...)<br /><br />Glad you stopped by. I popped over to your blogs & enjoyed them a lot. I'm a sucker for bestiaries and alphabet art, so your work is right up my alley.<br /><br />Take care.Josh Hockensmithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08076902096863597045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3372023810212340305.post-51603012981699786492011-08-25T22:11:09.208-04:002011-08-25T22:11:09.208-04:00Hey Josh,
Found you via 365 & I've been en...Hey Josh,<br />Found you via 365 & I've been enjoying browsing your poems.<br /><br />This one is intriguing-- much stronger with the new last line, but I miss the squirrel! For me that's part of the pleasing contrast/surprise.<br /><br />Also I like that you found this poem in the "dry leaves" of your pocket papers.Curious Arthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01180271950246123614noreply@blogger.com